Ramai yang suka hentam, taram atau lagi 'bagus' kosongkan subjek.
Subjek merupakan kepala kepada email anda, bila anda buka email, apa yang nampak dahulu?.. isi email atau subjek??.. subjek kan?.. jadi jika anda sedar hal itu, anda patut lebih tahu yang subjek adalah benda paling penting dalam menghantar email rasmi.
Disini saya berikan contohnya subjek dan cara mengarang ayat email rasmi (terutama dalam Bahasa Inggeris):
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Oh ya.. dulu saya mohon kerja guna email. Saya kongsikan macam mana saya buat karangan dan cara membalas email rasmi yang diterima. Nak tahu kena scroll sampai habis.. Terima kasih..
CONTOH 1
Anda nak tanya mengenai langganan majalah anda dan anda ada maklumat no langganan.
Subjek: The XXX International School Membership ID: Z12314DE
Isi email:
Dear IOP,
I want to know the status of our subscription?.. is it active or not?..
If so why since July 2014 we never received the printed magazines (Physics World) anymore?
Thanks.
Regards,
XXXXX
Library Assistant
The XXXX International School
CONTOH 2
Subjek: Membaharui langganan Majalah Dewan Pelajar 2016 Untuk The XXX International School
Isi email:
Assalamualaikum dan Salam Sejahtera,
Mengikut kertas yang dilampirkan pada sampul bungkusan majalah, langganan kami tamat pada Februari 2016.
Oleh itu, kami ingin membaharui langganan kami untuk setahun lagi. Diharapkan pihak tuan/puan dapat memberikan invois atau sebut harga kepada kami agar kami dapat membuat pembayaran secepat mungkin.
Kerjasama daripada pihak tuan/puan amatlah dihargai.
Terima kasih
Yang benar,
XXXXX
Library Assistant
The XXXX International School
CONTOH 3
Subjek: Renewal Membership Invoice for The XXX International School (Membership No.: 1231DEA)
Isi email:
Dear The Historical Association,
Please can you send to us the renewal invoice for 2016 membership.
Thank you.
Regards,
XXXXX
Library Assistant
The XXXX International School
CONTOH 4
Anda nak tanya mengenai langganan yang dilanggan oleh orang lain untuk update maklumat nama dan alamat penerima.
subjek: The XXX International School Subscription (Ms. XXXX XXXX)
Isi email:
Hi ASE,
Please could you check for us about our subscription. It suppose registered under the name of Ms. XXX XXXX (science teacher). I wish I could gave you more details like subscription number or membership number, but we couldn't as she already left the school and her emails already deactivated. Sorry to troubled you. But we really need to change the information so we could maintain the subscriptions. Please do help us.
If you do, found our membership account, can you change the details into this:
Contact name: XXX XXX
Position: Head of Libraries
Email: XXXX@XXX.edu.my
Password: xxxx
Thanks.
XXXX
Library Assistant
The XXXX International School
CONTOH 5
Anda memohon bantuan dari pihak ketiga untuk membantu anda.
Subjek: User Problem Please Help! - The XXX International School, Selangor, Malaysia
Isi email:
Dear XXXX,
I found two problem when accessing 'Subscription' in 'Serials':
1. I cannot edit 'Description'. In older version, I can always update the Description according to current year. But now, it cannot or won't save the change.
Is there any new ways for me to edit it?.
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2. I cannot 'Add' the 'Copy Assignment' in 'Subscription details'. That add button seem not function. Thus it create a problem for me that I cannot check-in new magazine. I tried to fill all the important box, but that 'add' button still doesn't work. In older version, add button works fine. I even tried to follow steps according your latest manual, but that 'add' button still not working. Did I miss something here?.
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Please help me configure these problem.
Thank you for your cooperation.
And I hope to hear good news soon.
Regards,
XXXX
Library Assistant
The XXXX International School
CONTOH 6
Subjek: Login problem (Membership No.:3546-9454) The XXX International School
Isi email:
Dear Wallpaper Team,
We bought the Wallpaper* magazine through mymagazine.co.uk.
I tried to register on Wallpaper* website but doesn't have a box to put our membership number on it.
Is there any way for us to register and maintain our membership as well.
Thank you.
Regards,
XXXX
Library Assistant
The XXXX International School
CONTOH 7
Anda nak reset username dan password:
Subjek: Resert password and user name to website (Membership number: ABS12563)
Isi email:
Dear D&T,
Reason we asked to reset them both, because last year, the teacher that have this login already left the school and not letting anyone knows the login information.
Previously we already ask to change the person in charge name but we forgot to ask to reset both our password and user name to the website.
Please can you help us.
Thank you.
Best,
XXXX
Library Assistant
The XXXX International School
CONTOH 8
Anda nak hantar resit bayaran kepada vendor:
Subjek: TT payment details
Isi email:
Dear Sir/Madam,
Please see attached bank remittance for your reference. Please acknowledge upon receiving this payment slip details.
Thanks & regards,
XXXX
Library Assistant
The XXXX International School
Seperti yang dijanjikan. Inilah format dan karangan yang saya guna masa mohon kerja dahulu:
Bagi yang internet slow @ gambar tak keluar, meh saya taipkan apa yang saya tulis:
Subjek: Jobstreet.com : <nama syarikat> - <jawatan yang dipohon>
Isi:
Sir/Madam,
I would like to introduce myself,<nama penuh anda> from Ipoh, Perak. Currently stayed at Precint 9, Putrajaya. I learned that your company has the job's vacancy of Library Assistant posted on Jobstreet website, 30 August 2012. Thus, I would like to apply that above mentioned vacancy.
In brief, I'm a graduated student, Bachelor Degree in Library Management and Information from UiTM Shah Alam and Diploma in Information Management, UiTM Kelantan. I have a good communication in English, have knowledge of Windows 2000/XP/Vista/7 and MS Office 2003/2007/2010. Currently, I'm working at MAMPU (Unit Pemodenan Tadbiran dan Perancangan Pengurusan Malaysia) Library in Putrajaya as Administrative Assistant. I trust that I am suit to the job as above. <kat sini karang ayat yang sesuai.. ayat ni dah out-dated.>
Please do not hesitate to contact me for further clarifications and information. I am available anytime at your convenience for the interview. Please contact me at <no telefon> or/and email me at <email anda>
Thank you very much.
Sincere,
Nama Anda
Lepastu jangan lupa:
Wajib -> attach sekali softcopy resume anda.
Tak wajib -> cover letter
Tips: yang saya kalerkan warna merah tu penting.. dan yang paling-paling utama sekali.. tolong buat email yang professional sikit.. jangan guna email macam budak kecik yang tak matang.. buat alamat email yang menggunakan nama anda yang sebenar ok..
alamat email yang betul: (rekaan nama je ye) nursafiyaellisha@gmail.com / znursafieyaellisha@gmail.com -letak z kat depan tu huruf pertama nama ayah: z = zakaria
contoh alamat email orang tak matang: (rekaan nama je ye) safieyacomey@gmail.com / sakuracintahati@yahoo.com
Dan jika anda menerima email balasan dari syarikat tersebut. Sila balas...
Dear <nama pengirim>,
I am writing to accept your job interview invitation for the position of Library Assistant.
Thank you for giving me this opportunity, I look forward to meeting you on 19 September 2012.
Kind Regards,
<Nama anda>
Lain kali saya kongsikan lagi contoh-contoh memohon pekerjaan dengan email dan cover letter yea..
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